Game looks amazing, and the theme is a spot on for me - so once it’s released, i’ll probably buy it.
Here’s the only part I’ll throw some constructive criticism on:
The one thing that I’m not really to keen about is the name.
I’ve read the explanation above, but it simply doesn’t click that well due to the mix of Latin and English and with “Axis mundi” being the official astronomical term for the Earth axis between it’s celestial poles, which defines it’s rotation.
Axis on it’s own is just a Latin word which translates to the word “line” and it is used in different fields from politics and art to science and technology. When you drop the 2nd word of the term it loses the meaning. Using it together with an english word like “Axis unseen” changes it even further, literally translating it to Line unseen.
When choosing a name, try to avoid being too witty about it, because for the majority of the customers it will be too much to connect all the dots, especially solely from the title (as the majority won’t know all the details of the game and the correlation between one of the usages of the term Axis Mundi. Gotta think from the merchants point of view.