Seeking 'Collaborative' Sci-Fi Military Interactive Fiction Writers

**Futuristic Inspired Enhancement Research (F.I.E.R.)

That’s some really really awful writing there. Using the words “Futuristic” or “Inspired” to name government organizations is absurd.

The rest of the plot is dense with cliché. If this is supposed to be serious game then I would suggest you trash the story so far and start over. If this is a parody game with deliberate bad and lazy writing then I apologize and would like to congratulate you, keep going!**