Looking good. My biggest critiques for you would be your camera movements.
There seems to be some inconsistent speeds which makes the camera feel jarring. Sometimes it just moves too fast.
The brute camp camera feels very floaty. And part of that has to do with the speed at which you are moving your camera as well.
Ease-in and Ease-outs at the start and end of camera movements are your friend. Learn your different tangents and find what works for your shot.
I know I’ve been hammering a lot on camera, but it is what holds your whole scene together, and what I saw isn’t bad. Just needs a bit more practice and polishing it up.
thanks for the advices! i’m a beginner and i’ve learned with youtube’s tutorial and trying. I don’t know how to use properly cameras but i will improve on that side too
