My first game!

Hi! I just realesed my first game. It would be awesome if you could check it and to tell me, what you think about it))What i did wrong or what should i add etc.It is very important for me. Thank you!))

Video game play can let people advice and comment about your game , not everyone like to download games as most of the people here are developers and not a gamers who have time , so try to give us a video and hope people will interact more .