I think the visuals are quite ‘noisy’ and in your face really, I think in this case - less is more, try pruning back some of the detail and giving a more clean look.
Just my 2cents 
I think the visuals are quite ‘noisy’ and in your face really, I think in this case - less is more, try pruning back some of the detail and giving a more clean look.
Just my 2cents