https://youtube.com/watch?v=adVxTse2tic
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Great lighting and texturing! Probably my biggest criticism is the camera movements. It’s best to never actually let the camera stop. It feels a little awkward when it does, so I would recommend you cut to the next shot or somehow have smoother transitions into movement in other directions. A few of the shots seemed a little redundant. Your stuff looks good, so don’t spoil it by making people bored. It’s better to have them wanting to see more than to have them wish you were hurrying up. For example, I feel like the shot that starts at 2:18 is completely unnecessary. It doesn’t show me anything new and gives me a little motion sickness instead.
My one critique about the actual content is that the wind shader on the plants feels very unnatural. It feels more like an agitator you see in chemical labs rather than wind. I think having no movement on an indoor scene is acceptable.