People don’t usually do that well on their early works since it takes time to develop skills, so without much experience it’s going to be difficult to live up to your claims. We don’t see much physical sculpture type stuff here so I was interested to see your work, but with only one piece of work to show it’s not going to help you much to get paid work. The piece itself has good general forms, but it looks unfinished, it needs to be cleaned, smoothed, and detailed. If someone likes your quality of work then it shouldn’t matter to them what someone else thinks. I’m just giving you advice that will help you be more successful, you simply need a larger portfolio.
Also it would help if you took better pictures, it looks like they were taken with a phone camera and they’re mostly out of focus.