Welcome to the community (although I’m also fairly new :D)!
Your scene looks pretty nice. I like the urban and natural mix in it. Some suggestions:
- Like Wilkes said, turn down the glare/lens flare a bit
- You could use something like Matinee to animate your camera movements. This way you can create curves and so on which makes for a much nicer video
- The placement of the trees at 00:42-00:44 looks very “symmetric/clean” and unnatural. I think if you randomize it a bit more it’d look better