The first scene i have completed, Medieval style scene.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wHz--Z5tz3Q&feature=youtu.be
Took me 2/3 days also figuring out how to do all of the camera work, as you can probably tell i’m still new and learning so no hate 
Your scene… is extremely dark. Why dont you add a directional light and a skylight to support it… play around with just those 2 lights 1st and brighten up the scene… and for any other artificial lights, add non-shadow casting fill lights to dark areas and bring the map to life 
yeah i wanted it to be a dark scene but i think i may have overdone it, i turned the light source all the way down so that i could get the night sky box.
What are these “non-shadow fill lights” you speak of?