Greetings @Poizan !
I would have loved to finish viewing your short film, but due to my photosensitivity regarding the flashing images, sadly, I could not finish enjoying it. I did, however, read the sonnet “Ozymandias” and can appreciate your adaptation mentioned in the description.
From the still shots, your project looks like it tells a haunting story of warning. Is this a project for university? Are you an avid poetry reader? If so, who are your favorite poets or do you have a favorite poem?