I know I need to continue improving with all aspects of animation, including take recorder, as I ended up with a few jittery cop cars along the way!
Your animation and music in the cinematic music video âCrashâ is fantastic! Despite the cop cars being a bit shaky, your hard work is evident and appreciated. Thank you for sharing it with us in the forums. Keep striving for excellence and reaching new heights! Youâre doing great!
I can see you put a lot of effort into this video.
This is better than anything I have created myself.
Made me think of the Blues Brothers Movie - ( driving inside a Mall. )
My feedback on how you could improve ?
Work on the Lip Sync - some of the âmouthâ positions seemed off.
Because she is singing - you really focus on her mouth.
The Lighting seems hard âroughâ - more like a 90âs game engine - less ârealââŚ
The cars donât seem to have the right âWeightâ⌠when a car hits another - itâs speed and motion is affected⌠also she seems to be on 2 wheels - a lot. ( I understand, sheâs in a hurry⌠)
Just an idea - is it even possible to recreate a âGrease Pencilâ look - in Unreal ?
Maybe this look would make it easier for you to focus on the animation and make it more smooth, natural ?
Also - there was no âBig Pay Offâ at the end⌠she made it home in time⌠heâs still thereâŚ
I feel there is something missing⌠maybe he should have prepared her a âsurprise mealâ ?
- I just think it needs more of a â Punchline â ?
Anyway, great work, well done, I hope you donât mind my honest feedback ?
Hello @Carrythecolors !
Making a large project is very nerve-wracking and tedious experience. While everything may not be perfect in your eyes, there is a beauty in the content that you pushed through to make. Itâs very telling that you have a passion for this and I would love to see more of your work as you continue to grow.
I think the story of the music and the video itself is truly astonishing that itâs well. Keep up the lovely work!
I can easily visualize this as an Interactive Music Video. Just add the repeatable race/crash mechanics, a Player Controlled Character and put the song on loop