Hey man, thanks for sharing this!
I have to say though that this project would need some more work done first before I could look at it, since I believe it is not yet in a state where it would really benefit from me going over it. Its really hard for me to work on very basic or unfinished scenes since I need certain things to be there for me to do my work.
Your project looks like you are in a fairly early concept stage, so making it look really good with lighting only is almost impossible right now.
I hope this is okay for you as it by no means is meant in a rude way. But looking at the video you shared, its just not yet enough. Keep pushing for it and we could potentially have a look at it later. However, one thing to notice as well is: I am always gonna look out for scenes that in my opinion have the most educational value as well.
So please, to everyone, dont feel mad if I decide to not work on your scene! I get quite a lot of submissions and have to carefully evaluate on which ones I will work.
Thanks again and cheers! 