Great work on this! Honestly, I picture this being a great start menu scene that just passes time while waiting for you to hit start!
As for some feedback:
- I love the day to night transition and your foliage and assets look great. Looks like you’ve got a good workflow there!
- I really like the transition to night and having the fireflies particle effect. Maybe add a little more light to them to be brighter and having the twinkles on and off to really sell their effect.
-The clouds (particle effect?) on each side of the mountain seems to stand out. If this is intended to be clouds have a fade out with the night transition. If it’s suppose to be like a volcano spewing smoke/ash then having maybe a glowing ember look or yellow/reddish glow would help sell that more. - When doing the day/night cycle getting a moon in your skybox rotation would be cool for the night and the stars. I believe Hourences and some other users have incorporated this into their Day/Night cycles as well.
You’ve got a great start that with some tweaking could go much further! I really do look forward to seeing what else you get done with this! Keep us up to date on how this progresses!
Tim