Nice modeling and lighting.
But i don’t like the massiv bokeh. It is absolutly to much for such a short focal length and this focal distanceso it leads to the impression that we see a miniature and not a real store. In reality, if you have a wide angle like a 24mm and the focal distance at about 4 meter and an f-stop about 2.8 there is only a slight bokeh that means ist is not blured so much. As example: at an 24mm with an apperature of 2.8 on an APS-C Sensore and an focal distance of 4 Meter, everything from 2,7 to 6,13 Meter is sharp.
This site is quite good, to learn a bit about dof an bokeh: DOF simulator - Camera depth of field calculator with visual background blur and bokeh simulation.
Cheers Asta