Great concept. It seems like, according to the reviews, you just didn’t beta test it. The game looks decent overall, and storytelling is a really overlooked aspect of gamemaking that’s hard to teach people. The bad reviews aren’t unreasonable. They seem more like constructive criticism to me rather than people trying to tear you down. I would listen and implement what they are talking about. Also, from a marketing perspective on a PC you should probably have male characters to play as well. I think most guys have a problem playing female characters. Also, while you are very strong in terms of artwork and storytelling, I think it’s fair to say you lack in the more technical details. Game levels shouldn’t be taking forever to load. It’s okay to get help, or get a consultant, to help you fix those things.