is their anything glaring obvious about this

i am trying to make a physics based movement system for fun, no i dont want to use the inbuilt system and have gotten to the end of my ability to debug/troubleshoot it, can you please help point out any sins i may have committed during its creation

Hey there @Chao5uns! Welcome to the community! If you attempted to add some media there, it looks like it didn’t make it into the post!